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[mamiixhe]

OH MAY GHAD! ngangayon ko nakita 'to! napanganga naman ako sa mahabang Update na 'to! grabe ate Ellie! ikaw na talaga! love na love ko talaga si AJ! as in! deserve nanaman ni Ate Ellie and 1 milion thumbs up ko!God Speed

[jny]

hahaha!!! tama yan mamiii, kay AJ ka!!!! wahhhhhhhhh!!!

ala akong matinong ma-comment ngaun dahil super @@ ako! pero para kay SEFMYLABS.....

paramdam ka naman ng sizzling hot moment sa next chapter!!! (wwwwwwwwwwwwwwAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH) ---

[mamiixhe]

jny naman eeh. hahaha! bigay ba naman ako kay Aj? lol. pero sigi. magkakasundo kami nyan!



oo nga, ate ellie! paramdam naman kay Sef )

[BatangSingkit]

nice story

[elliedelights]

LOVE-NAT 51-2. NASAAN KA ELLIE-SA?



Eleonor Malicsi Dimaculangan

Sometimes, I couldn’t help but wonder… if Cinderella’s shoes fit her so perfectly, then why did it slip off her foot while she was running away? Was it just a trick – a hoax – to make the prince fall for her? Some fine strategy for a romantic gimmick? Or was it just the grander scheme of things? Or maybe… who knows, it could be just an old style of royal flirting. Haha.
Weird ko talaga mag-isip ano? Haha. Well, this was actually one of the many reasons why I, Eleonor Malicsi Dimaculangan, do not believe in fairytales. What? Cinderella even got herself a fairy godmother to make her love story possible. Pero sa totoong buhay, fairy godmothers do not exist!!
Di ba? Kahit noon pa, I’m pretty sure I made myself clear about this matter… What can I say? I’m a real sucker for fairytales!! Haha.
I gave one creepy smile & saw myself reflected against the bathroom mirror. Siguro kung nasa mundo ako ng fairytales, ako siguro yung Evil Queen sa buhay ni Snow White… o kaya yung Evil Step Mother ni Cinderella o kaya si Ursula, yung malaking octopus, sa buhay ni Little Mermaid. Buwahahahaha. With this creepy, evil smile I have right now, I’m sure as hell I’d be a natural KONTRABIDA!! Hahahaha. Over qualified pa nga ata!! Bagay talaga sakin ee!! Kung nakikita niyo ko ngayon, siguradong sasang-ayon kayong lahat!!
Yeah, I’m most likely to be like them… siguradong mga ka-tropa ko na ang mga yun at ako ang LEADER NILA!! Haha. Kagaya nila, I inflict pain… ako yung panira… & most of all I HURT people – even those who are most important to me – kagaya ng ginawa ko kanina kay… MAX.
Napabuntong-hininga ako as I recalled the look on Max’s face right after our conversation. I swear I sawright through him… kaya hindi tuloy ako makatingin ng diretso sakanya… I was so afraid to see the pain – the pain that I’ve caused – that I’ve started!!
Sabihin niyo nga sakin, ano bang tamang gawin? Ano bang sinasabi sa mga ganoong klase ng sitwasyon? When your bestest friend, yung taong tinuring mong parang kapatid, parang KUYA, yung taong sobrang mahalaga sayo, yung KAHULI-HULIHANG TAO SA MUNDO NA AYAW MONG SAKTAN… just told you that if he were to be given 10 more seconds to live, he would spend it by saying how much he loves you!!
See, I am no expert in love or in any aspect of romances… haha, obvious ba? Pero alam ko kung ano yung ibig sabihin ni Max. Siguro nga, matagal ko ng alam… matagal ko ng nararamdaman yun… but I chose to ignore it… I chose not to read between the lines… coz’ I thought maybe… I was just getting ahead of myself.
ARGH!! ANAKSHUTANG ANIMALES!! TEKA NGA?? BAKIT KO SINISISI ANG SARILI KO??? ANO BANG INIISIP NI MAX?!?!?! I clenched my fist and was tempted to slam it on the marble sink. WHY WOULD HE SAY SOMETHING LIKE THAT??? ANG TANGA NIYA!!! BAKIT AKO PA???? LECHUGAS!!!
I did the best I could… at least I told him that I love him too, didn’t I? Psssh. PAKER KA ELEONOR!!! PAKERRRR!!! Pero bakit? Tell me, meron bang mas madaling paraan para sabihin sa kanya? Yung hindi siya masasaktan?
MADAPAKER NAMAN KASI EE!! What we had was perfect… BAKIT KAILANGAN PA NIYANG… GULUHIN NG GANITO?
TEKA NGA!! HUWEYT POR JUAN MADAPAKING MINUTE ELYONOR!!! BAKA NAMAN NAHILO LANG SI MAX??? REMEMBER, GALING SA OPERASYON ANG KAIBIGAN MO!! NAKA-HIGH YUN SA SOBRANG DAMI NG GAMOT NA BINIGAY SAKANYA NG MGA DOKTOR!! MAYBE, HE WAS GOING TO TELL THAT TO SARA!! KASO IKAW TONG UNA NIYANG NAKITA… AT… PERO SAGLIT…
“… sa sampung segundong yun Ellie… sasabihin ko sayong… mahal kita.”
HE DID MENTION MY NAME!!
“Ah, SH!T!” I hissed angrily.
“Oi.” Biglang sabi ni Borge, who just came out from the cubicle. “Anong prublema mo diyan?”Nagkatinginan kami doon sa salamin.
“Pwede ko bang sapakin si Max? Kahit isang beses lang?” Yun ang biglang lumabas sa labi ko before I could even stop myself.
“Huh?” Borge sniggered & stared at me through the mirror. “Edi sapakin mo!” She shrugged. “Last time I check, this is a democratic country!”
I sighed and decided to wash my hands. I need something to cool me down. I splashed some water on my face & Borge stood there, watching me.
“Tol, sabihin mo nga sakin…” She then said, leaning against the sink. There was a small smile tugging in the corner of her lips. “What is it about falling in love that you find so scary?”
I froze that my mind even went blank. Animales!! Ano bang pinagsasasabi nitong si Borge? Anak ng… Dapat ata siya itong sinasapak ko at hindi si Max. Amp!
She laughed when she saw the way my eyes went wide and then in a split second, I was already giving her an angry glare. She obviously caught me off guard!! “Ahahaha, patawa ka talaga Eleonor!! Kapag usapang pag-ibig na, nagiibang-anyo ka!!” Umakbay sakin bigla si Borge. We were now both facing the mirror. “Pero tol, ang hindi ko talaga maintindihan… pag dating sa pag-ibig… doon ka sooobrang WAGAS mag-isip!! Para kang si Einstein kung mag-analyse!! Ikaw nga nagturo sakin na minsan, may mga ilang bagay na hindi na kailangan pag-isipan pa!!” Then she looked intently at me through the mirror before adding with a smile, “Di ba?”
I blinked.
Kita niyo itong babaeng ito!! Nagpapaka-Pilosopo Tasyo nanaman!! Hahaha. Oh diba? Yan si BORGE!!! Ganyan ang isang Beatrice Gong-gora Natividad… she always says the things that you needed to hear exactly at the right moment.
“Tae ka naman tol ee…” I whined, removing her arm from my shoulder. “MIND OVER HEART DAPAT!! MIND OVER HEART!!”
“Ano? Haha.” She laughed. “Pwes, sinasabi ko na sayo ngayon pa lang Eleonor… this… either with Sef or Max… this is gonna end bad!! And worse? You’re gonna get HURT!”
Matagal ko ng kaibigan itong si Borge. Ever since we started college, hindi na kailan man napaghiwalay ang bituka namin! Biro pa nga niya, hinablot daw ako sa tadyang niya… HAHA. Kaya nga ultimo sa HAIR STYLE ee halos parehong-pareho kami!! Siya talaga yung ANINO ko. Walang Ellie, pag walang Borge. Kung nasaan ako, andun siya. And I knew better to LISTEN to her… kasi kahit ganyan yan ka-gago… laging may katotohanan sa lahat ng sinsabi niya sakin!! Tulad nun dati… nung sinabi niya sakin ang mga katagang – “Anakshota ka talaga Ellie!! Alam mo minsan… ikapapahamak mo yang pag-potchi mong yan!!!” (Chapter 00. Potchi is the Word.)
Diba? Napahamak nga ako’t nakilala ko ang animales na si SEF!! Hahaha. Pero wala… sadyang matigas talaga ang ulo ko!!
“Gaguuu.” I muttered with a joking smile.
Suddenly, the comfort room was drowned with Borge’s ringtone – yung PAPA AMERICANO na remix.
“Sheet, si Japo!” Borge said before she answered her phone. “Hello? Yeah, dito pa kami sa CR. Bakit?”Borge nodded at me, inviting me na lumabas na kami ng CR. “Ow? Si AJ? As in si EHY-JAY?? Ahh… ano daw nangyari?”
Napalingon ako kay Borge. We were now walking down the hospital wing, pabalik sa kwarto ni Max.
SI AJ?? Ano nanaman at nadawit ang pangalan ng pinsan ko? Malakas ang kutob ko’t may ginawa nanamang kababalaghan yun!! ANIMALES!!
“Sige. Sige.” Borge was nodding. “Papuntahin ko na lang si Ellie jan.” With that she ended the call.
Napakunot noo na ko. “Ano yun? Bakit?”
“Si Japo tumawag. Nandun daw siya sa ER nitong ospital, jan lang sa baba. Sinasamahan yung pinsan mo… nagka-minor injury daw ata siya.”
My heart barely dropped. Ano bang nangyayari LORD? Una si Max… tapos ngayon naman si AJ!!! ANG SARAP PALUIN NG MGA TAONG ITO!! GAAAAH!! I then pulled Borge by the elevator. “TARA, PUNTAHAN NA NATIN!!”
“Sunod na lang ako.” Borge said. “Walang kasama si Max sa kwarto ee. Ako muna taga-bantay!”
Ahy, oo nga pala! “Sige. Sige.” I nodded & she started to walk away. But before the elevator door could even close, bigla ko pinigil ito at inilabas yung ulo ko. “UY, BORGE!!” I called her, yung itsura ko seryosong-seryoso pa. “TIRAN MO KO NUNG KFC AA!!” Bakit ba? Naalala ko may nagaabang nga pala saking pagkain!! Hahaha. Kentucky Fried Chicken din yun nuh!! Bleh. J
Napangiti si Borge sakin. “Oo na!! Nimales ka talaga!”
Pagkababa ko ng elevator, tinanong ko pa yung nurse na nakita ko sa hallway kung saan ang ER nila dito. She gave me the directions at maya-maya pa ee nasa Emergency Room na ako ng St. Mercy’s Hospital. Sobrang daming pasyente na nandoon. There were countless hospital bed na ang namumukod-tanging nagseseparate sa bawat isang kama ay yung pirasong kurtina na nakasabit paikot sa mga ito. At grabe, there was one boisterous cry na rinig sa buong ER. Parang nagwawalang pasyente!!
I turned around… looking for any familiar face… Si Japo or si AJ… Nasaan na ba yung mga yun? I looked to my right & finally noticed JAPO at the far corner of the room. Hindi maipinta yung itsura niya, parang kulang na lang magtago na siya sa ilalim ng kama. He walked a few steps away from the bed, where I assumed AJ was lying on. Kinakamot niya yung ulo niya, sabay yuko nung dumaan yung nurse sa harap niya… parang gusto na lang niyang maglaho na parang bula sa kinakatayuan niya.
Ano kayang nangyayari doon? I wondered, running towards them.
“AJ?” I gasped. “Anong…”
“Ellie!!” AJ cried. Oo. As in literal na CRIED. Fresh hot tears were cascading down my cousin’s cheeks. Sa totoo lang kamuntik ko ng hindi makilala si AJ… itong pinsan kong ito? Na laging demure? Na kahit kelan ee hindi nakakaharap sa tao ng may magulong hairstyle? Yung pinsan ko na always & forever na ingat na ingat sa flawless niyang skin… ay mayroong isang MALAKING BLACK EYE circling around his left eye. At hindi lang yun, his hair was disheveled na kala mo isang taon siyang hindi nag-suklay!!“ELLIEEEEEE!!! WAHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHU…” Hagulgol ni AJ when he saw me. I went in front of him, nakaupo lang kasi siya doon sa kama. Now I know… si AJ pala yung nagwawalang pasyente!!
Siguro, in normal circumstances… I would have laughed my *** off!! AS IN. Pero imbes na matawa, nakonsensya agad ako that my heart ached upon seeing my cousin like that. Naawa talaga ko sakanya… I carefully placed my hands on his cheeks para tignan maigi yung mukha niya. “Ano? Masakit ba?” I asked worriedly.
“WAAAAAHHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHU…” Lalong umiyak si AJ. It wasn’t a cry of someone na nasaktan, in fact he sounded more like a professional crying lady!! Oo, yung solo lang na trabaho. Hindi na niya kailangan pa ng mga kasama. Kasi yung hagulgol pa lang niya, rinig na sa buong ospital. Kaya naman pala parang gustong maglaho ni JAPO sa kinakatayuan niya ee.
“Bakit? Ano yun?” I asked him again.
“CUZ!!!” He whined, ayaw tumigil nung mga luha niya!! Kinabahan ako, feeling ko may mas malala pa siyang nararamdaman. Pero parang nagdilim ang paningin ko ng bigla ba naman niyang sinabi,“AMPANGET KO NAAAAAA!!! HUHUHUHUHUHU!!”
POOTEK!! Parang gusto kong dagdagan yung black eye niya ng wala sa oras ee!! Dun naman sa kanang mata para pantay na!! “Animales!! Akala ko naman kung anong nangyari sayo!!” I shouted angrily, quickly dropping the nice, sweet act.
“Pppffffttt.” I heard Japo sniffled a laugh behind me. “Haha. Sorry. Kasi naman, magkalahi talaga kayo nuh?”
“Sira ulo! Hindi naman ako ganyan umiyak nuh!!” I said defensively. “At teka nga!” I then frowned back at AJ. “Ano bang nangyari’t nagkaganyan ka? At SINO ba may kagagawan niyan?” Aba… kahit naman wala ng pag-asang tumino ang pagiisip ng pinsan kong ito… hindi naman ako papayag na api-apihin yan ng kung sinu-sino!! LECHUGAS!! LINTEK LANG ANG WALANG GANTI!!!
“Kasi nga bigla kang nawala.” AJ began, may kasabay pang iyak yan. “Tapos itong si Sef hinatak ako. Nagpunta kami sa bahay niya… tapos may hinihinging cellphone si Sef dun sa lalaking gwapo… nag-away sila. Tapos ayun… Nagsuntukan yung dalawa.”
“E sila pala itong nag-away ee bakit ikaw sumalo nung suntok?” I retorted back. Si Japo pinipigil-pigil pa rin yung tawa niya sa likod ko!!
“Syempre umawat ako nuh!!” Tumaas ang kilay ni AJ. Ayan, nahihimasmasan na ang loka. Nagtataray na ulit. “Aba malay ko bang balak nilang mag-ala Raymart Santiago at Mon Tulfo doon?!?!”
“So, feeling mo naman ngayon ikaw si Claudine Barreto?” Nagsalubong lalo yung kilay ko. “Sino sakanila ang gumawa niyan sayo?” I demanded.
Before AJ could even reply, may suave na boses na biglang sumagot sa likod ko. “I did.”
Japo, AJ & I all together turned around to see kung sino yun. At ng makilala ko na, pakiwari ko tumaas ang lahat ng balahibo ko sa katawan. Nakaramdam agad ako ng takot and at the same ng isang matinding INIS!!
I remembered this guy!! Pero sa pagkakataong ito… naka-DAMIT na siya!! He was clad with a tight gray shirt & a pair of jeans, at take note nakasarado na ang zipper nito. A silver necklace was hanging loose around his neck & a black tribal-designed-tattoo peeping out from the sleeve of his shirt. Mabuti naman at nakasaplot na siya ngayon at hindi kagaya dati nung huling punta ko sa bahay nila Sef… kulang na lang tubuan ako ng sang katutak na kuliti sa mata!!
And one more thing was rather different, yung mukha niya!! He has a small band-aid placed on the bridge of his nose. There were also few evident bruises on his cheek and chin. But all in all, he looks presentable… hindi kagaya ng SOLID NA BLACK EYE NI AJ!!
Pero yung YABANG sa katawan ng lalaking ito, ee kahit kelan hindi na ata mawawala. He stood arrogantly before us, his dark black eyes glued on me. His well-defined arms crossed against his chest. “Small world, huh.” He smirked, teasing… and I felt on the weight of his stare that he was actually referring to our last encounter.
“Enzo?” Japo muttered a name, which I presume he was referring to this arrogant guy. “Y-you’re here? Since when did you get back?” Sabay kunot ng noo ni Japo, as though confused. “And… you two… know each other??”
Ah, lechugas!! Bakit ba lahat na lang ng mga MANYAK sa buong bundo kilala lagi ni Japo???
“John, this girl owes me thirty-hundred bucks & one night of pleasure.” Agad na sagot nung Enzo. It was then that I noticed, na meron siyang accent sa pagsasalita. Like he was really very fluent in English.
“ANO?!” I screamed angrily at him, my hands clenched to a fist… handa na akong dagdagan ang mga sugat niya sa mukha!! I don’t know what angry spirit possessed me to stand up to this guy na kagagaling lang din sa suntukan!! Animales ka Ellie!! “Ang alam ko lang ikaw ang may utang na SORRY sa pinsan ko!!”
Enzo threw a questioning look at Japo, like he has no clue about what I just said. Ahh, nakshuta!! Hindi pa pala makaintindi ng TAGALOG ang amboy na toh!!
“I said, you should apologize to my cousin NOW!” Tinranslate ko tuloy yung sinabi ko sa English.
“You go girl!” Mahinang cheer ni AJ sa gilid ko.
Enzo gave a smug smile. “What is there to say sorry for? He was the one who stood in the middle of the fight. He brought that to himself.” Obvious, as in obvious!! This guy doesn’t feel SORRY at all!! Grabeeeeeee!! Kahit sabihin pang aksidente yun, siya pa rin yung nakasakit… HE SHOULD APOLOGIZE TO AJ!! “But if there’s anyone here who should be apologizing, it’s got to be YOU!”
“Excuse me?” I gasped. SHEET!! Napupuno na talaga ako sa lalaking ito!! GAAWD!! “You think I should apologize for ruining your one night of SEX??!!!” Hindi ko napigilan, sobrang napalakas yung boses ko when I mentioned that LAST word. Dinaig ko pa yung naka-microphone habang nagsasalita.
Biglang tumahimik ang buong ER ng St. Mercy’s Hospital. All eyes on me. Yung tingin ng mga matatandang pasyente ee parang gusto nila kong paluin at kurutin sa singit. All the female population there looked at me with disgust… and the males were smirking as if pleased about that one word itself.
Anakshutang animales Ellie!!! I felt my ears burning by the passing minute… NAKAKAINIS!!! GAAAAAAAHH!!!
And before I knew it… this guy, this despicable guy whose name was ENZO started laughing so hard.
“Pffffttt… hahahahaha!” He was rocking into fits of laughter. Yung mukha niya namumula na sa kakatawa.
Napalingon ako kay Japo. Nanlilisik ang mga mata ko!! “SINO BA TALAGA TOH?!” I asked him, halata sa boses ko na sasabog na ko sa galit. I’ve seen this guy for so many times already, run into him in a bar, saw him naked & he nearly kissed me… & up until now, all I got was his name: Enzo!!
“That idiot is my cousin.” A voice answered behind me. And that voice was enough to make my knees tremble… yung lakas ng loob ko na makipag-sagutan kay Enzo kanina biglang nawala… my lips went dry & my hands started shaking. Hindi ko na kailangan lumingon… MY HEART RECOGNIZED THAT VOICE.
And precisely at that moment, my mind began to scream at me: ELLIE, TAKBO!!!!
“Yes, idiot is my last name!” Enzo finally said, his laughter subsiding.
Anak ng pating… Nakatingin lang ako kay Japo… ni hindi ko makuhang lumingon!! Japo raised a brow at me. Nagtataka siguro kung anong nangyari sakin. Kanina ang ingay-ingay ko, at kala mo kung sino akong amazona na naghahamon ng laban… tapos ngayon… gaaaah!! Animales Eleonor!! Ano bang prublema mo?!?!?! Eeeeee… ayoko na!! Andiyan na SIYA ee… TOINKS!! Umayos ka nga!! PAKER!! Wew. GO, HARAPIN MO YAN!! DI BA? Ilang beses mo ng sinasabi? WALANG KINAKATAKUTAN ANG MGA DIMACULANGAN??
I took one deep breath & slowly turned around, my eyes glued on the floor.
“Oh, ayos ka na AJ?” I heard Sef asked, sabay tapik sa braso ng pinsan ko.
“Oo naman.” AJ answered giving him a thumbs up. Yung boses niya buong-buo. Parang lalaking-lalaki.“Sabi ko naman sayo, wala lang ito.”
Ee kung sinasabunutan ko kaya siya? Kung maka-hagulgol nga siya kanina kala mo wala ng bukas ee!! It was then that I took the courage to take a glimpse of Sef… he was wearing a navy blue shirt at tulad ni Enzo, he was wearing jeans.
Pero nung tumingin ako sakanya, it was already difficult for me to remove my gaze… and soon enough, I was staring at his… face. My eyes widened. Totoo nga, nagsuntukan nga talaga sila ni Enzo… Sef had a band aid just right above his left eyebrow. There was an evident bruise showing at the corner of his right eye… and there was a fresh scar in the corner of his lip.
Kawawa naman tong boypren ko!! Haha. Animales Ellie!! Kala ko ba tinataguan mo yan?? Ee bakit ba? Concern ako ee!! HAHAHA. Naku, loko talaga itong pinsan niya!! Balak pang sirain ang magandang muka ng boypren ko!! Aba, Eleonor, panay-panay naman ata ang tawag mo ng boypren!! HAHA. Tss. Wag ka! Walang basagan ng trip!!
I felt a question tugged in the depth of my heart. “O-okay ka lang ba?” I could imagine my own voice if ever I say that… it would be soft but filled with worry… kagaya nung boses na narinig ko ngayon-ngayon lang… pero syempre, tawasin niyo man ako… hindi ko sasabihi—T-TEKA LANG… b-bakit sila nakatingin saking lahat??
Enzo scowled as if something disgusted him. AJ had his eyes widened as if surprised about something… and then… there was S-Sef… His face was expressionless as his eyes locked with mine. My heart quickly made a leap… POOOOOTEK ELLIE!!! Feeling mo naman si John Lloyd na yang kaharap mo???
“Oi, Sef!” Japo called sabay akbay sakin. “Tinatanong ka kung okay ka lang daw!”
A-ANO??? GUSTO BANG MAGKA-BLACK EYE NI JAPO NG TULAD NG KAY AJ???!!! LECHUGAS TALAGA ITONG SI JAPO KAHIT KELAN!!! I looked helplessly at AJ… at sa itsura ng tingin niya sakin… naconfirmed kong… SINABI KO NGA TALAGA YUN!!!
PATAY!!!
Oh good Lord!!!!! Napalunok ako. Don’t tell me that question slipped off my tongue???
Parang nagsasayaw ng ati-atihan yung puso ko ngayon…
At this moment… parang gusto ko tuloy mag-ala CRYING LADY!!!!!!
WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHUHUHUHUHUHU!!!
Feeling ko kasi… nag-I LOVE YOU ako ng hindi ko man lang namamalayan!!
To be continued.
*And here is where the picture above comes in!!*

[jny]

SALAMATS ELLLLLLIIIIIIIIEEEEEEE!!!

PIC PA LANG BUSOG NA KO HAHAHA!! wagas ka nga!!! next chapt,, habaan mo naman un speech ni SEFMYLABS!!!

at e2 pa,,, napa-isip tuloy ako... NO NO NO talaga ang mag-tanong ng ok ka lang sa guy???

di ka dumaan sa SB, katampo ka!!! miss you

[lhie yesha]

ang kyut ng picture ni sef!!!!!!!!

yiiiieeeee!!!

kakilig yung itsura nya!!!


next update na po ate ellie!!

[cassiopeia]

ellie!!!ano na??nganga pa din ba??UPDATE!!!!