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#1 frizzyivy

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Posted 06 Nov 2008 - 09:54 PM


I got this from the net and I just want to share it with you.. Prepare your hankies guys..

Nice short story.. I swear...


Love's Song

Part 1

“ Mother, Yuri, I’ll be back in an hour!” Simon Kowan called, climbing into the red Fiat. The car pulled out of the Kowan’s driveway in Sacromento, California.
Yuri did not need to guess where her brother was going. He was going on a date with his beautiful girlfriend Jenni. She stared wistfully at the fading car, and wished she had Simon. People often said Yuri did not resemble her family, and they were not wrong. After all, she was an adopted child. Yuri had beautiful black hair and a slim body fit for a fifteen year old, while Simon’s handsome features and slick blonde hair resembled his father, who died years ago. Mrs. Susan Kowan, the kind widow, as most people called her, was not beautiful for a women of forty eight. But her kind face had no wrinkles and her blonde hair showed no specks of gray.

Yuri had a crush on Simon for three years now, and she loved him far more than a brother. His blue eyes could catch any girl’s heart, but Yuri knew in her own heart that she loved Simon more than anyone else in the world, even Mrs. Kowan.

Yuri spent the hour reading and waiting for Simon, as she always did. The clock ticked noisily and the sounds of Mrs. Kowan’s knitting and her chair rocking could be heard throughout the house,

Late into the night the sound of keys in the door was heard and the door creaked open. A boy Simon of age eighteen stepped in quietly as a mouse and went up to his sister, who had fallen asleep waiting for him on the couch, her book across her lap. Silently, he went up and put her head on his shoulder. The sleeping girl stirred but fell back into her slumber. Simon stroked Yuri’s head gently for a while, then kissed her cheek. The moments of silence were broken by the loud chimings of the grandfather clock, indicating midnight.

“ Yuri, I know of your feelings toward me,” Simon whispered into the night and to his sleeping sister. His voice was so soothing, like a lullaby.” I am sorry I am unable to love you back as more, but I will always love you, almost as I love Jenni. You are a beautiful and gentle girl, like the night breeze that lures me to sleep each night. I have to go for a while now. Sleep well.” Simon slowly lifted Yuri’s face up to his, then gently placed his lips over hers. It was a short kiss, but a true one. Seconds later the boy left again. Yuri opened her eyes and gazed at the empty driveway, trying to recall the kiss that she only half remembered, then fell back asleep.

The quiet dawn house of the Kowans were once again disturbed by the shrill ringing of the phone. Yuri rose from the couch and picked up the phone that rand at two o’clock. A male voice spoke.
“ Miss Kowan, this is Officer Jyo from the Sacromento Police Department. I think you’d better come down to South Street. There has been an accident with your brother.”
Then he hung up.

Yuri was still for a moment, before she threw down the receiver and screamed.” Mother!”
Two ladies, one young, and one old, arrived at South Street minutes later. Police cars were everywhere, and there was an ambulance. A small crowd was huddled around two bodies.

Yuri and Susan Kowan rushed and pushed through the crowd, where three officers were examining the two bodies. One was a stranger, whose head was heavily bandaged and stains of blood were visible through the bandage.
The other was Simon. The boy’s head was bleeding heavily and blood stained his body, where cuts amd bruises were located. Two more officers came with a stretcher and lifted the stranger onto it.

“ Emergency room immediately. There still might be hope.” An officer said.
“ What about my brother? He needs to go to the hospital, too!” Yuri screamed, her voice shaking uncontrollable as she stared at the bloody heap of her brother.
“ He needs to go! Somebody, bring a stretcher!” Yuri was shrieking, tears streaming down her face as she wrung her hads desperately.
“ Miss Kowan, I’m sorry. There is no need for Simon to go to a hospital.” The officer said, trying to soothe the frantic girl.
“ Why not! That person got to go! Ther’s still hope!” Yuri cried, shaking her head.
“ Simon Kowan is dead.”
Yuri froze. Susan Kowan fainted, but Yuri didn't. Before she knew what she was doing, she grabbed the officer’s shirt.
“ You’re lying. Simon said he was only going out for a little while. He’s coming back!” Yuri cried shrilly. At that moment all she wanted was for her brother to come back. She thought she was going crazy.
“ I’m soory. But he is dead.” The officer replied, looking somber. He loosened himself from Yuri’s grip and walked away.
Yuri stood, then knelt in front of Simon. She stroked his soft blonde hair as he did to her, staining her hands with blood from his hair. Her tears spilled and she hugged Simon to her. The crowd slowly parted, leaving Yuri and the dead Simon. The officer came over and patted Yuri’s shoulder gently.
“ Miss Kowan, we have to take your brother.” He said. The officer waved his hand and two other policemen gently pulled Yuri off Simon.

Yuri didn’t know why she didn’t object. But she didn’t argue as Simon was lifted onto a stretcher and covered in a white cloth. The sirens of the ambulance and police cars softened as they slowly drove away. Yuri felt a fresh wave of tears come to her eyes, and she stood staring at the disappearing vehicles.
Simon Kowan died on December 14th.



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Posted 06 Nov 2008 - 09:55 PM


more chapters to come...

hope you're going to like this story...

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Posted 07 Nov 2008 - 04:27 AM

Love's Song

Part 2

It had been almost a year since the death of her brother. Yuri never really got over the tragic incident, but much to her surprise, life soon became normal again for all others, but never for Yuri. A part of her had died, and she knew it was her heart. The yound girl decided to attend a music orchestra school in England. After Simon’s death, they never shut down the small beach house Yuri’s brother owned, but nobody ever went there again. However, everything inside was still active.
Yuri buried her thoughts and quickly placed the picture into her suitcase. She grabbed the suitcase and heaved it downstairs, where her mother was waiting for her.

“ Come on, hurry up, dear.” Mrs. Kowan beckoned, climbing into the driver’s seat of their Fiat.
Mother and daughter bidded each other goodbye at the airport. Susan Kowan kissed Yuri on the cheek and told her to go and be careful.
Hours and hours later the American Airlines landed at the London airport. Yuri climbed off the airplane along with the other passengers. Security gaurds stood still as statues at every entrance, an the airport here wasn’t as crowded.
The girl’s eyes darted around for some sign of what she was looking for, a person or people who represented the Carson Music Shool.

Just then Yuri heard her name.
“ Miss Yuri Kowan!”
She spun around. A boy dressed in a blue uniform gestured toward her. He ran over and took her suitcase, escorting her to a small group of people who were dressed as he was. The boy was red-haired and freckled. His British accent was strong and he seemed very polite.
“ Miss Yuri, this is our president, Mr. Aaron Spiel. And I’m Randy.” The red head introduce.
Yuri nodded and shook hands with Mr. Spiel.
“ Welcome, Miss Kowan. We are honored to have you attend our music school.” Mr. Spiel said warmly.” Thank you for coming all this way.”

They escorted Yuri to a van and rode to the school. England was beautiful in an eerie way. Everything in London was so formal and exquistive. The construction was unique and brilliant, in Yuri’s thoughts.
They arrived at a white marble building and went inside. Pictures and portraits of the orchestra and extraordinary players were hung all over the wall.

Suddenly out of the corner of her eye, Yuri saw a lock of slick blonde hair disappear at a corner of the hallway the girl’s breath caught in her chest as Simon’s silvery blonde hair flashed across her mind. She dropped her suitcase and ran to the hall where she had seen the boy. But just then the doors opened and a crowd of students holding violins came out. Yuri searched frantically for the boy, but he was gone.
“ Yuri, is anything wrong?” the voice of Randy brought her back to her senses.
“ Oh, nothing.” Yuri hestitated, then asked.” Is there a boy named Simon Kowan in the orchestra?”
Randy looked at her, puzzled.” No, Yuri. Do you know someone of the name?” he asked. Yuri’s eyes locked with Randy’s , then she shook her head.

Later Yuri was brought to a dormitory, where there was two beds. Randy addressed Yuri to hers, which was on the far right.
“ Yuri, I understand if you’re tired, but in an hour there will be a welcome ceremony for you. You can come if you wish.” Randy set down her suitcase and walked out. The girl peered around the dormitory and hung her clothes up in a closet that she shared with the other girl. She’d just set down her picture of Simon and her when the door opened and a girl entered. The girl glanced at Yuri, then walked up to her and held out her hand, her blonde curls dangling from an expensive butterfly hairpin.
“ Hello, I’m Emily Radley. You share a room with me.” The girl said abruptly in a superior tone.
Yuri held out her own hand and shook Emily’s.
“ I’m Yuri Kowan.” She introduced.

“ Oh, so you’re the girl from America? Going to the ceremony? I wouldn’t miss all the attention for the world if I were you.” Emily sat onto her own bed and popped a candy into her mouth. “ I play the viola, you?”
“ I play the harp.” Yuri explained. She did not feel like engaging conversation with anyone right now, especially Emily. Emily seemed to read her thoughts, and she hopped off her bed, looking bored.
“ Well, I’m leaving.”
The girl slammed the door behind her.


Edited by frizzyivy, 07 Nov 2008 - 04:42 AM.


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Posted 07 Nov 2008 - 11:41 PM



waaaaaaaaaa.. wala man lang nag comment sa story na to

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Posted 07 Nov 2008 - 11:48 PM

waaahh... me....

i just sign in a while ago.... LoL...

it's cool.... just continue...

why did the brother died?? huhuhuhu... sad.....

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Posted 08 Nov 2008 - 12:36 AM

wiie.. soo cool.. i like the story..(:

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Posted 08 Nov 2008 - 06:07 AM



yehhheeyy.. thanks for readingg...

here's the continuation.....

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Posted 08 Nov 2008 - 06:07 AM

Love's Song

Part 3

An hour later Yuri stepped up onto the stage and was introduced to the orchestra piece of one hundred and seventy.
Yuri scanned the big orchestra with interest. It was certainly a good orchedstr. Suddenly Yuri spotted the platinum hair again. Once again Yuri felt her heart hammer against her chest. The boy’s hair was slicked back and his head was down, studying the keys fo the grand piano. Yuri dropped the microphone with a loud clang and all heads turned to her. Emily and her huge group of friends smirked and giggled. The boy looked up and Yuri gasped with shock.
The boy was Simon. Exact sapphire blue eyes looked at her, except ten times colder, and the same pale skin and beautiful blonde hair.

“ Simon!” Yuri whispered, her voice hoarse with shock. The boy stepped up to her.
“ What do you want, Kowan?” he asked icily.
“ Oh, this is Thomas Vacur, our pianist.” Randy explained, looking rather embarrassed at Thomas’s rude attitude.” He’s rather unhospitable toward strangers.”
But Yuri didn't hear him. All she saw was her handsome brother, standing alive in front of her. Tears filled her eyes and even Thomas seemed surprise as the teardrops slid down Yuri’s white face and dropped onto her harp.
“ You’re not dead.” Yuri whispered.
“ You are very much mistaken, Kowan. I never died. And my name is not Simon, it’s Thomas, T-H-O-M-A-S, in case you can’t hear or spell.” The boy turned on his heels and went back to the piano.
Why is Simon being so mean and cold? Yuri thought. He doesn’t love me, he hates me. Why does he glare at me like that like he never knew me? Clapping her hands over her mouth, Yuri sped out of the auditorium.

“ What did you call Thomas, Yuri Kowan?” Emily demanded, rounding on Yuri forcefully, where Yuri was staring wistfully at the picture of her and Simon. Emily snatched the picture out of Yuri’s hands.
“ How did you know Thomas?” she snapped, staring at the picture in disbelief and disgust.
“ That’s my brother Simon when he was still alive.” Yuri said, reaching out to take her picture back.” Please give it to me.”
Emily smirked and held the picture out of reach.
“ You really like him, don’t you?” she asked. Yuri looked away but didn’t answer. To Yuri’s horror, Emily dropped the picture. The glass frame crashed to the floor an it shattered. The picture lay in the puddle of broken glass.
“ NO!” Yuri cried, bending to pick up the picture. The girl felt her heart shatter the moment the glass shattered. Tears streamed down Yuri’s face as she held the picture to her chest.
“ Why did you have to do that?” Yuri cried, glaring up at Emily with tear-filled eyes.
“ Oh, I’m soo sorry. It just slipped out of my hand.” Emily siad sarcastically. She moved her face closer to Yuri’s.” But I’m warning you, Yuri Kowan, I like Thomas, so stay away. He’s mine.” She stepped over the glass an stalked out, leaving Yuri and her shattered frame and heart.

Neither Yuri or Emily mentioned anything about the picture incident. Yuri performed spectacularly the next few days and their orchestra concert was a great success.

Thomas walked over to his dormitory after the day of exhausting performing. His fingers were numb from playing. He reached his dormitory and found his dormmate, Willis Patan sitting on the floor, three cups upside down in front of him.
“ Want me to fortell your future for you, Vacur?” Willis asked, wrinkling his forehead.
“ No thanks, Patan. I’ve outgrown fortune-telling.” Thomas said coldly.
“ Come on, Vacur. Try it.” Willis nagged, pulling on Thomas’s sleeve. The boy swung free and rolled his eyes, sitting down across from Willis.
“ Pick one.” Willis instructed, mixing the three cups up. Thomas gave an impatient sigh and picked the middle one. Willis carefully opened the cup and took out a piece of paper.
“ Ooo, this is a love spirit. It says the girl of your life is getting closer to you now. You will find on her a card that says the same thing as I said to you.” Willis said, with a look of awe on his face.
Thomas rolled his eyes in annoyance. “ It’s just a bunch of crap, as usual.” He muttered, climbing into bed.

Yuri walked along back to her dormitories after a day of music class. Suddenly, a shoulder knocked into hers and immense pain shot through her shoulder bones. It was Thomas. For a moment their eyes met. Yuri stared deep into Thomas’s blue eyes and saw something. She wasn’t sure what it was, but it looked like a streak of sunlight through all the ice. She stared at him for a long while and he stared back. Yuri couldn’t believe that anyone could look so alike in the world. The girl thought of Simon’s handsome face, and his wonderful blue eyes, and that he would be standing here right next to her, them still joking and laughing like old times, if he hadn’t died in that horrible accident. If it weren’t for that other stupid driver, Simon would still be here— A single tear rolled down her cheek and she let it trickle down her chin.
“ Why do you always cry whenever you see me, Kowan?” Thomas asked, narrowing his eyes so they looked like slits.
“ You remind me of someone,” Yuri said vaguely, looking as if in a trance.” Someone that meant the world to me, someone who would be here today if that car accident hadn’t occurred one year ago.” Yuri turned on her heels and sped down the hall toward her dormitory. She hated facing Thomas. She didn’t look back to see Thomas staring after her for a long time. Somehow he remembered so clearly the way she looke at him. The way her tears rolled down her cheeks when she looked into her eyes. He slowly felt his heart crack.
Why did he care, Yuri thought. Why would he care about she cried. Unless he really is Simon? Before Yuri could go into solutions of how that was possible, something on the ground caught her eye. It was a card that was laying face down. Curiously Yuri picked it up.
“ The boy of your life is getting closer.” Yuri read the card out loud. The girl smiled wanly. She didn’t believe in fortune telling, but all the same Yuri stuffed the card into her pocket, then went off to her dorm.


Edited by frizzyivy, 08 Nov 2008 - 06:11 AM.


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Posted 08 Nov 2008 - 08:48 PM

wow.... cool....

poor Yuri.... still misses her step brother....

LoL... so Yuri and Thomas said the same thing... so they are the love of their lives?? LoL

continue!

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Posted 11 Nov 2008 - 02:00 AM

Love's Song

Part 4

Emily Radley sat in music class, her beady eyes focused on Thomas. How she loved his icy glare and his hair was silvery and admirable. The time ticked by slowly as Emily spent thirty minutes staring at the side of Thomas’s face. She noticed his glance turn to Yuri several times and the girl’s eyes narrowed into a sneer. He never even looked at me, Emily thought angrily, her glint filled with not envy, but jealousy. What’s so great about that Yuri girl anyway? Emily had always been known as the princess of Beauty to all her schoolmates, and her wealthy background was most admirable. Most boys’ desire was to have Emily as their girlfriend. And yet, Emily thought glumly, the only boy she loved never even showed the slightest interest toward her. But somehow, Emily Radley was going to get what she wanted, even if her father’s money couldn’t buy it.

Emily took out her most expensive quill and very carefully and slowly slid it into Yuri’s schoolbag. The girl glanced around to make sure no one was watching, before she burst into a fit of fake tears. All heads turned to her.
“ Miss Radley, what’s wrong?” the teacher, Ms. Spinner asked, her chalk breaking in half out of her surprise.
“ My quill! My most expensive and precious quill is gone! It was a gift from my grandma, before she died!” Emily sobbe, pretending to look devestated. Everyone began to look around for her pen.
“ Everyone, turn your bags inside out.” The teacher ordered. Everyone did so obediently. Emily saw with grim satisfacation that Yuri looked dumbstruck when the quill fell out of her backpack.
“ Yuri Kowan, how dare you!” Emily cried, pointing a menacing finger at Yuri. “ You are a thief!”
Everyone threw loathing looks at Yuri and the teacher scolded her.” Miss Kowan, you must understand that thievery is strictly forbidden and will not be tolerated at this school. I will have to report this. Do you have anything to say?”
Yuri looked at Emily in disbelief but did not say anything. Emily sneered at her. “ No, this is unacceptable, Ms. Spinner. I will take the punishment.” Yuri said after a moment.

Thomas stared at Yuri in astonishment. He saw Emily frame Yuri. Why hadn’t she denied it? He thought, bewildered.
Long after class was over, Thomas watched Yuri wash the board and scrub the tables. He stood waiting until she was done, then stepped up to her.
“ Wanna go for a walk?” he asked quietly. Yuri looked up in surprise.

Yuri and Thomas walked along the sandy beach in silence. They both stared at their feet and the sand, each avoiding the other’s eyes carefully. Finally, Thomas broke the silence.
“ Why didn’t you deny it and speak the truth? Look at your hands, they are blistering and red from all that work, and yet, why did you not tell the truth to avoid such pain?” he asked, finally finding his voice. It was his first time taking a walk with a girl, he never knew it would be so awkward. For a moment, Yuri didn’t reply, as if thinking of an answer.
“ Emily Radley is not someone you would want to mess with. She is stubborn as a rock and wouldn’t give up until she gets her way. If I don't give up, she will think of more ways to accuse me.” Yuri replied earnestly.” You know, she seems very attracted to you.” Yuri added as an afterthought, or perhaps to change the subject.
Thomas’s face clouded over instantly.” That’s none of your business.” He said shortly. “ I’ve known Emily for lond, she is not quite my type.”
Yuri fell silent.
“ It’s getting cold, let’s go back inside.” Thomas suggested after another moment of silence. Yuri nodded and they started to walk back to the school.

That night Yuri dreamed of Simon again. She dreamed that he had come back to life, and they had reunited already. Her heart was filled with happiness. They were to be wedded. On the happiest day of Yuri’s life, just as the moment when Simon was to give Yuri the ring, Emily came up and stabbed her in the back. She felt intense pain and saw Simon fadding away— Yuri woke up screaming and sobbing. It was then that she realized she was still in her dormitory, and that Simon was dead. It was close to midnight, and to Yuri’s enormous relief Emily had not yet returned. Her thoughts drifted to Simon, and her heart sank. Why did she have to think about him? She thought desperately. All she wanted was Simon’s life back.
Just then the dormitory door opened and the figure of a boy came in. Yuri sat up, her eyes slightly unfocused. As her vision slowly cleared, she gasped. It was Simon.
“ Yuri, are you alright?” Simon said.” I heard you screaming.”
Yuri threw her arms around Simon’s neck.
“ Simon, why did you have to leave me like that? You really really scared me when the police officer said you died in that crash!” Yuri murmured, hugging him close to her. Her tears were mingled with sweat from her dream, and she held him.

Thomas was totally surprised. Yrui clung onto his neck and broke down completely. He didn’t know why he didn’t shove her off and snap at her to come back to reality, but he didn’t. He just let her hug him and weep.
“ How could you leave me like that? Do you know how much I missed you? I thought about you every night, Simon. I love you so much.” Yuri wept, her voice shattering.
Thomas didn’t speak.
“ Simon, please don’t leave me again—“ Yuri gasped. Then, to Thomas’s astonishment, she pressed her soft lips on his and kissed him softly.
She’s in such pain and suffering so much, Thomas thought sadly. She must’ve loved Simon with all of her heart. Tears slid rapidly down Yuri’s face from her half opened eyes.
Just then Yuri gasped in surprise and stopped kissing Thomas.
“ I—I’m so sorry, Thomas.” She apologized hastily.
Thomas continued to stare at Yuri.” It’s alright.” He said, beginning to blush.” I’d better go now.” he said awkwardly.
Yuri blushed and nodded. She draped a robe around her shoulders and escorted Thomas downstairs.
“ Can’t tell me who Simon is?” Thomas asked. Yuri looked at him and shook her head sadly.
“ I’m afraid not, Thomas,” she said quietly.” I’m sorry.”
Thomas’s smile faded.” You know, it’s better if you stopped living in the shadow of that dead boy!” he said stiffly, his lips pursed in a thin line.
Yuri turned to Thomas in disbelief.” How I live my life is my business, not yours!” she snapped.
“ Use your brains, if you have any,” Thomas shot back.” What good is it to live thinking Simon will come back, when he will never!”
The girl felt a fresh wave of tears flow down her face.” And what would you know about love, Thomas Vacur?” she snapped coldly.”I bet some block of ice like you never loved anyone in your life! How would you know how I loved Simon?”
Thomas didn’t answer.
Yuri stared furiously at him for a moment, then stormed back to her dormitory. She slammed her door shut. Emily had not yet returned. Yuri was glad. She was getting sick of the girl’s taunting. Yuri stood fuming for a long time, hot tears stinging her eyes bitterly.






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